Posts Tagged ‘work in progress’

On Letting the Novel Simmer

Wednesday, May 23rd, 2012

I’ve been away from my Work in Progress for almost two months. I had only planned to give myself a month’s break, but it wasn’t until the end of that period that I decided I really needed feedback from my beta readers. So now I’m on hold, waiting for them to finish reading it and give me critiques.

I’m one of those people who hates to sit still, both literally and metaphorically, so this period of not moving forward with my novel is torture. I have a hard time telling myself that it’s okay not to be outwardly productive, that part of writing is not-doing: thinking, percolating, letting the story simmer in my unconscious. I know this is true, but whenever I think it, the cynical overachiever in me just rolls her eyes and says, “Yeah, right. You’re just justifying being lazy.”

But while I’ve been twiddling my thumbs and cursing my non productivity, something interesting has happened. Without setting fingers to keyboard, I’ve found myself solving problems in my novel, deepening character connections, and devising new plot twists. With each passing week, I feel that I have a clearer sense of direction and a stronger idea of what my book is really about. If I had jumped into a revision after a month away, I would have gone off half cocked. But now, once I receive and integrate the feedback from my beta readers, I’ll be truly ready to dive in to a rewrite. And I know I’ll be glad I had an extra month to let my novel simmer.

 

Five Tips for Working with Beta Readers

Friday, May 4th, 2012

The first draft of my Work in Progress is now in the hands of my beta readers! I feel incredibly blessed to have a wonderful group of readers whom I trust to give me honest, objective feedback on my work. Because I’m so close to my own story, gathering outside opinions is absolutely invaluable. Here are some tips for working with beta readers, based on my own experience:

1. Choose your readers wisely.

At the beginning stages, it’s essential to show your work only to readers you trust, readers who will give you both constructive critical feedback and encouragement. While you definitely don’t want your baby in the hands of someone who is going to criticize it harshly just for the sake of being negative, you also want to make sure that your readers aren’t inclined to handle your writer’s ego with kid gloves. You need readers who will be able to see the shining spots in your manuscript and point them out to you, as well as letting you know the sections that need to be strengthened in order for your story to live up to its full potential.

2. Let them know what kind of feedback you want.

If your beta readers are seeing a first draft, you want them to look at the big picture, not nit-pick over grammar or word choices. The more specific you are about the kind of feedback you’re looking for, the more targeted their comments will be. In a previous post, I shared some of the questions that I ask my readers to answer when critiquing a first draft. The most important thing I want them to tell me is what they see as the “heart” of my story. Once I’m clear on my novel’s heart, I can carve away any elements that don’t support it.

3. Give them a deadline.

I have a love/hate relationship with deadlines. The pressure of them can cause anxiety, but they also operate as a kick in the pants to ensure I get my work done. I think readers need deadlines, too. I know everyone is busy with multiple projects, so I usually give them a month to read my draft and give me feedback.

4. Take in their feedback.

This seems obvious, but sometimes it’s hard to actually take in the feedback you’ve asked for, especially when you know that acting on a particular comment will necessitate major work for you. We all like to hear that our stories our great, but learn to see critical feedback as a gift. Your readers truly want to help you make your work better!

5. Listen to your gut.

In the end, it’s your book. You have to sort through the comments from your beta readers and decide which truly resonate with you. If more than one reader makes the same comment, definitely pay attention. But remember, you’re still the one with the final say. I once added some characters to a novel, even though my instincts told me not to, because every one of my beta readers thought my main character needed more friends. I ended up taking the characters out again because they just didn’t feel right.

Do you have any other tips for working with beta readers? I’d love to hear them!

Character Interview

Friday, April 27th, 2012

As I mentioned in my last post, I was inspired by Rachel Vail‘s keynote at the SCBWI WWA conference to get to know my characters better. So yesterday, I sat down with the main character of my WIP for an interview. I find that character interviews are one of the best ways to learn more about the people that inhabit my stories. There’s something about the question-and-answer format that allows stuff I haven’t thought about consciously to come through.

To do a character interview, I open a Word doc and, in bold, type a question I want my character to answer, for example, “What are you most scared of?” Then, in regular font, I write my character’s answer. I try not to think as I do this, just let the words flow. Because of that, some really surprising information comes out of these interviews.

For example, yesterday I asked Joan, my MC, what she was most afraid of. She told me she was really scared of being attacked and raped, and because of that, she avoids walking alone at night and always carries the pepper spray her mom gave her. I had no idea! And, of course, I may use that information at some point to enrich my plot. Or maybe I won’t, and it will just help me understand where Joan’s coming from a little better.

Here are some standard questions I ask in a character interview:

How would you describe yourself?

How do you think other people would describe you?

What makes you happiest?

When are you most unhappy?

What frightens you the most?

Where do you think that fear came from?

How does this fear affect your life?

Can you tell me something about yourself that you’ve never told anyone else?

Is there anything I can do better in telling your story?

Often the answers to these generic questions will lead to other questions that are specific to my novel.

So if you want to get to know your characters better, try a character interview. Feel free to use my questions. You can also find a list of 100 interview questions here.

Have you ever done a character interview? If so, what’s your favorite question to ask your characters?

 

Fear of Finishing?

Friday, March 30th, 2012

I’m on the verge of finishing the first draft of my latest novel. I know, I’ve been saying that for at least a month. But now The End is really, truly in sight, just one short scene away. “So, why don’t you just buckle down and finish the thing?” you may ask. And my answer is….I don’t know.

I want to be done with this draft. Really, I do. I’ve been working on it since September, and the thought of writing that final sentence fills me with a sense of incredible freedom. But given how slowly this last few-thousand words has gone, I also wonder if maybe it fills me with something else – namely, fear.

Why would I be afraid of finishing a manuscript? Well, of course, there’s fear of failure. What if, after all that work, I read through the draft and discover that it’s a pile of crapola and that I’ve just wasted seven months of my life? Or what if I  see some potential in the story but have no idea how to bring it out?

And then there’s fear of success: What if I’ve written such an amazing blockbuster that I receive a mammoth book deal and have to travel the world doing book events and my life, as I know it, will never be the same? Hmm. Somehow I doubt this is my issue.

I have a feeling that what I’m experiencing is just plain old fear of the void. What will I focus on when I no longer have this gargantuan task in front of me? How will I fill my time? What problems in my life that I’ve been avoiding by being insanely busy will use this opening to rear their ugly heads?

What about you? Have you ever avoided finishing a draft? Why?

 

Four things authors wish their friends and family knew

Wednesday, March 14th, 2012

I’m now nearing the end of my third month as a published YA author, and I’m realizing that there are a few things that I, along with many of my author friends, wish my friends and family knew:

1. We’re not ignoring you.

The writing life consists of several phases, one of which I call the Manic Phase. During this time period, we’re so caught up in meeting deadlines and/or racing from event to event that we simply don’t have time to go out for coffee. Or chat on the phone. Or even answer your emails. We don’t want to ignore you, we just don’t have a choice. We can’t wait for things to slow down so we can give you the attention you deserve.

2. Don’t tell us you loved our book. 

Well, actually do tell us you loved our book – we thrive on positive feedback. But don’t stop there. If you really want to help us, please tell other people you loved it, too. Facebook it, tweet it, review it on Amazon and/or Goodreads, shout it from the rooftops!

3. Don’t ask us how sales are going.

Casually asking us how sales are going is like asking a terminal cancer patient, “So, how many days you got left?” In most cases, we don’t know exactly how many books we’ve sold. Unless we’ve made it onto the New York Times bestseller list, in which case, we’d let you know. If sales aren’t going well, answering that question is just, well…awkward. A better question might be, “So, are you having fun writing your next book?”

4. We appreciate you!

We know we don’t say it often enough, but we appreciate you. Thank you for supporting us in reaching our dreams and loving us through the great times and the crazy times. We couldn’t have done it without you!